My introduction! I have to write an essay about colonization in Africa

This is a young woman, probably about twenty years old, who stands with an air of power. Confidence is the most noticeable thing in her black deep eyes. Soft face, long shadowy hair, groomed and shining brilliantly, surrounds her gentle face. The brilliance of her dark skin makes her even more attractive. This woman was known by a nickname which is Africa. She was very fetching, so much so that her beauty pushed all men around her to brawl over who would deserve her love. Well, I'm sure that story summarizes things. I admit it is a sort of irony, but anyway it expresses how really things were going. Africa, "the kind pretty woman " faced European imperialist aggression, in other words, the western world -"men" - was so interested in her. In the beginning, she puts up various form of resistance, but unfortunately they were powerful, of course  - they are "men ". So after that, she became step by step influenced by them, to the point that she dressed up like them. They imposed their ideology on her, which is related to the poem that we read, the "song of lawino", where we can understand what I said clearly. Well, after that introduction a lot of questions come to the mind, like a big Why? Why was she was influenced by them even she was forced to submit to colonization? We still wonder the reason behind the period of change.

[Very interesting. Remember your capitalization. Also remember that a space goes after all periods and commas, not before.]