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Please, check and rate the essay. I would be very grateful If you had enough money, would you choose to buy a house or a business? For some people it is hard to choose whether to buy a house and get their stable salary or take a risk and run their own business. The issue is rife with conflict. I will elaborate on why I prefer start up my own business instead of buying a house. The bases of my view are personal and financial. Financially, running a business can make me a great profit. I believe that I can earn money for a great amount of things in several years, including a big house. For example, when my grandmother gifted a large sum of money to my aunt for her wedding, my aunt decided to rent a small flat and buy a shop nearby. Soon she profited enough money to buy a flat, a car and a countryside house. Secondly, I can develop my personal qualities. Business cannot exist without life up and downs. Business is a success, which is measured in terms of your responsibility, social skills, flexibility and moral strength. These traits are not only checked during the process of establishing a company, but also they are developed. For example, when my friend started up her own shop, it was mentally hard for her due to living through a lot of difficulties. In several years people began to find herself an ‘Iron lady’. To sum it up, my own preferences are echoed for buying a business rather than a house. I have just asserted the statement due to the follow reasons: personal and financial.

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Please, check and rate the essay. I would be very grateful.

If you had enough money, would you choose to buy a house or a business?

For some people it is hard to choose whether to buy a house and get their stable salary or take a risk and run their own business. The issue is rife with conflict. I will elaborate on why I prefer start up my own business instead of buying a house. The bases basis of my view are is (both) personal and financial.

Financially, running a business can make me a great profit. I believe that I can earn money for a great amount of things in several years, including a big house. For example, when my grandmother gifted a large sum of money to my aunt for her wedding, my aunt decided to rent a small flat and buy a shop nearby. Soon she profited enough money to buy a flat, a car and a countryside house.

Secondly, I can develop my personal qualities. Business cannot exist without life's ups and downs. Business is a success, which is measured in terms of your responsibility, social skills, flexibility and moral strength. These traits are not only checked during the process of establishing a company, but also they are developed. For example, when my friend started up her own shop, it was mentally hard for her due to living through a lot of difficulties. In several years people began to find herself her to be an ‘Iron lady’.

To sum it up, my own preferences are echoed for buying a business rather than a house. I have just asserted the this statement due to the following reasons: personal and financial.

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