Twins
When I was born,I had never abserve that I had some differ from other kids.But then I was older,I didn't care my look until I looked at the glass seriously one day.And I had abserved a girl who was looked the same as me.It was so miraculous!We weared the same clothes and shoes.We also had the same toys.She liked another me.Later,I learned a new word "twin".I had known she was my twin sister.Although she liked a very nice gift for my life,making my life no longer alonely.We still argued with each other sometimes.When her or my things were lost.We started argued with each other for another things,we both said that things belongs to own.But I think life needs some arguement,because before arguement,emotion could more deeply.(我的意思是吵了之后才知道感情有多好)
Sometimes,my classmates ask me if I look at my sister like look at the glass.I smile,maybe this time I think so,but next time maybe not.
In a word,I'm very thank to my mom.Because she gave me a nice present for my life---my twin sister.
当我刚出生,我从来没有感觉到我和其他的小孩有什么不同,但在我再长大一点,我从来都不关注我长成什么样直到有一天我认真的看着镜子,并发现有一个女孩和我长得一模一样,那太神奇了!我们穿一样的衣服和鞋子,我们也有一样的玩具。她就像另一个我。再长大一点,我学到了一个新的词“双胞胎”,我才知道她是我的双胞胎妹妹,尽管她对于我的生活像是很好的一个礼物,让我的生活不在孤单,我们也会相互吵架,当她的或我的东西不见时,我们就会开始争着另一个东西(因为我们的东西都是双份的,丢了一个,就争另一个)我们都说那个东西是我们自己的,但是我认为生活中就是需要争吵,因为争吵了以后才会知道感情有多深。
有时候,我的同学会问我看我妹妹的时候会不会像看镜子一样,我笑了,也许这个时候我会觉得像,下次又觉得不像。
总之,我很感谢我的妈妈,因为是她送了我这么好的礼物---我的双胞胎妹妹!
我可能出了很多的错,希望大家可以帮我改改!谢谢!
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你有丰富的表现力,
作为双胞胎,内心世界和成长过程和一家人的强有力的纽带联结在一起的样子写得活灵活现。
文章中洋溢着纯贞的爱情。
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