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Why am I depressed? 1, Best friend's gonna immgrant to Australia with her BF. 2, The Spring Festaval is around the corner, but no money to buy family presents. 3, Weight-loss plans before family reunion fail. 4, Unpleasant work. 5, No piece of happy thing to cheer up.

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  Why am I depressed? Well, my best friend is moving to Austrailia with her boyfriend; the spring festival is around the corner and I have no money to buy presents; my plan to lose weight prior to my family reunion failed, and I hate my job. I'm ready for something happy to come-along and cheer me up!

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Why am I depressed?

1, My best friend is gonna immigrating to Australia with her BF.
2, The Spring Festival is around the corner, but I have no money to buy family presents.
3, My weight-loss plans before the family reunion have failed.
4, Work is unpleasant/horrible .
5, No single piece of happy thing to cheer me up.

 

You wrote it like quick notes to yourself, and then most corrections are unnecessary; I have just cleaned it up.

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"Life has many different chapters, don't let one bad chapter end the book." Cheer up ~~o(^—^)o
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GOOD LUNK, Living in BJ is not easy for ordinary people.

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