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About my learning english English Learning

I use English are used in my daily life as a foreign language. And I think the most hard hardest thing part is to memory memorising lots of vocabulary.But However, some embarrassment may occur to you, you might get embarrassed when if you talk with to someone and can not can't remember some important words..So, it seems that you must have to store much vocabulary as much as you can.

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About my English Learning
I use English in my daily life as a foreign language. I think the hardest part is memorising lots of vocabulary. However, you might get embarrassed if you talk to someone and can't remember some important words. So, it seems that you have to store much vocabulary as you can.

Remember that you always need a full stop before starting a new sentence, like this; I like cheese. It tastes delicious.

You can either say "most difficult" or "hardest", but "most hard" does not sound very natural.

The last thing you need to remember is that "must" is a fancy way of saying "have to" or "has to", and therefore does not need the word "to" after it.

你说英语不错，保持良好的工作！