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Nowadays,there is a heated debate adout adout the high school in our class.Some likes to enter a boarding high school and and the others like to enter a day school.In my opnion,I prefer a day school to a boarding high school.If we enter a day school,we can avoid something unnecessary,such as argue with your roommate.Besides,you can also have more time with your parents.If you live in a school,although it is easy for you to go to the classroom,i think the enviroment in your dorm is not ideal enough to study.So I think a day school is better
Hi w董,
Thanks for telling us your story about your high school. In general, this was really well written. The corrections I've made were for the sake of clarity and natural-sounding speech. Please find my corrections below. If you have any questions about the corrections, please ask :)
Nowadays,there is a heated debate about high school in our class.Some would like to enter a boarding school, and the others would like to enter a day school.In my opinion, I prefer a day school to a boarding school.If we enter a day school,we can avoid something unnecessary,such as arguing with our roommates.Besides,you can also have more time with your parents.If you live in a school,although it is easy for you to go to the classroom, I think the enviroment in your dorm is not ideal for studying.So I think a day school is better.
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