letters

1) To a friend:

Hi Ann,Thank you for your letter. It was really nice to hear from you after all this time.I've been studying hard these months [better, 'for the last few months'] so I don't have much spare time. But I finally decided to relax a little and go to the Warsaw cinema. I have read several film reviews and they say there is an excellent film on. It is called 'The Conjuring' and it's a horror movie. The film starts at 8 o'clock on Saturday evening. Would you like to come along?My best friend is coming too. Actually, going to the cinema was her idea. She also suggested going to a local caffeeé afterwards. We could go to the Chocolate House. I know it's your favourite caffeeé and it's close to the cinema.We meet [better, 'We are meeting'] outside the cinema entrance at 7:30. I hope you will go come with us. Give me a call if you would like to come, I'll book the tickets.Best wishes,Vicka.

2) Official:

To whom it may concern [better (in a business letter), 'Dear Sir or Madam,'],
I am writing to express my severe disappointment at finding a hair in my Bonn soup.
I ordered it in a the restaurant on the Astronauts Street on December 18th, 2013.
As I started eating, I noticed something dark. When I pulled it out of lifted the spoon from the plate, I found a hair attached to the spoon it.
As you can imagine, I immediately stopped eating and called the waiter, but he refused t to bring the book of complaints [better, 'the complaints book'].
I'm your a regular customer of yours, but after this incident, I doubt that I shall come back to your restaurant
I trust you'll [better (in a formal letter), 'you will'] take this matter seriously and take whatever action you deem appropriate [better, 'take appropriate action' (he might not deem it appropriate to take any action!)].

Yours faithfully,Victoria Krasova

letters

1) To a friend:

Hi Ann,Thank thank you for your letter. It was really nice to hear from you after all this time.I've been studying hard these months so I don't have much spare time. But I finally decided to relax a little and go to the Warsaw cinema. I read several film reviews and they say there is an excellent film on. It is called 'The Conjuring' and it's a horror movie. The film starts at 8 o'clock on Saturday evening. Would you like to come along?My best friend is coming too. Actually, going to the cinema was her idea. She also suggested going to a local caffee afterwards. We could go to the Chocolate House. I know it's your favourite caffee and it's close the cinema.We meet outside the cinema entrance at 7:30. I hope you will go with us. Give me a call if you would like to come, I'll book the tickets.Best wishes,Vicka.

2) Official:

To whom it may concern,
I am writing to express my severe disappointment at finding a hair in my Bonn soup.
I ordered it in a restaurant on the astronauts street on December 18th, 2013.
As I started eating, I noticed something dark. When I pulled it out of the plate I found a hair attached to the spoon.
As you can imagine, I immediately stopped eating and called the waiter, He refused t to bring in the book of complaints.
I'm your regular customer but after this incident, I doubt that I shall I will come back to your restaurant
I trust you'll take this matter seriously and take whatever action you deem appropriate.

Yours faithfully,Victoria Krasova