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Happy Weekend I had a great time this weekend. I had gone back to my hometown after I finished my work on Friday afternoon. I spent four hours from the city Nanjing to my hometown Yixi. It is a long time though, I am glad to spend. Yixi is a small town, I grew up in there. There are lots of my classmates, friends, relatives. Once I go back, my friends always ask me to have a party. So did this weekend. In addition, another reason for the party. One of my classmate W is single, the other introduce her friend to her. We had a large dinner in a restaurant and then went out to sung songs. That boy sing song very good, but she don't like him. Maybe they should meet second time, third time , fourth time, they will have a good impression little by little each other. Just my guess. : ) I get back to Nanjing this afternoon. A friend picked me up because he finished a business trip near my hometown. So I save two hours in my back way. Thanks very much for him. This is my weekend. What a happy, friendly, funny holiday it is!

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Happy Weekend

I had a great time this weekend.
I had gone back to my hometown after I finished my work on Friday afternoon. I spent four hours traveling from the city Nanjing to my hometown Yixi. It is a long time, though I am glad to spend it. Yixi is a small town, and I grew up in there. There are lots of my classmates, friends, relatives still there. Once I go back, my friends always ask me to have a party, so I did this weekend.

In addition, there is another reason for the party. One of my classmates, W, is single, and the others wanted to introduce their friend to her. We had a large dinner in a restaurant and then went out to sing songs. That boy sang songs very well, but she don't like him. Maybe they should meet a second time, third time, or fourth time, and  then, little by little, they will have a good impression of each other. Just my guess. : )
I got back to Nanjing this afternoon. A friend picked me up because he finished a business trip near my hometown, so I saved two hours in my way back. Thanks very much to him.
This is my weekend. What a happy, friendly, funny holiday it was!

 

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