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a sunny Sunday Today is a sunny and warm Sunday in Beijing in winter. My wife , my two children and me have gone to a small park in our neighbourhood. Because the chilly weather and pulluted air, we have seldom gone out in this winter. Of course the most important thing we did there was taking photos. Since my parents and parent-in-laws live far way from where we live and work, we need send them the kids' hard-copy images. They miss the kids so much. When we were taking pictures for my son, he always tried to grab the camera. Hence it was hard to have a good one for him. After all he is only one-and-a-half-year old. There is a playing field with some sport equipments in the park. A lot of people with or without their children were playing a variety of sports. My son and his younger sister are too young to do anything like that. The equipments are all for adults and teenagers, by the way.But my son is never content with only seeing someone playing. He wanted to attempt. In fact those things might hurt him if he use them by himself. I realised I could do nothing but protected him on the equipments.

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a sunny Sunday

Today is a sunny and warm Sunday in winter in Beijing. My wife , my two children and me(I) have gone(went) to a small park in our neighbourhood. Because of the chilly weather and the pulluted(polluted) air, we have seldom gonego out in this winter. 

Of course the most important thing we did there was taking photos. Since my parents and parent-in-laws live far way(away) from where we live and work, we need('d like to) send them the kids' hard-copy images. They miss the kids so much. When we were taking pictures for my son, he always tried to grab the camera. Hence it was hard to have a good one for him. After all he is only one-and-a-half-year old.
There is a playing field with some sport equipments in the park. A lot of people with or without their children were playing a variety of sports. My son and his younger sister are too young to do anything like that. The equipments are all for adults and teenagers, by the way.But my son is never content with only seeing someone playing. He wanted to attempt. In fact those things might hurt him if he uses them by himself. I realised I could do nothing but protected him on the equipments.

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Aa sunny Sunday

 

Today is a sunny and warm Sunday in Beijing in winter. My wife, my two children and I me have gone to a small park in our neighbourhood. Because of the chilly weather and puolluted air, we haven't seldom gone out much in this winter.

 

Of course, the most important thing we did there was takeing photos. Since my parents and parent-in-laws live far way from where we live and work, we need to send them the kids' hard-copy images. They miss the kids so much. When we were taking pictures for my son, he always tried to grab the camera. Hence it was hard to get have a good one for him. After all he is only one-and-a-half years old.


There is a playing field with some sport equipments in the park. A lot of people with or without their children were playing a variety of sports. My son and his younger sister are too young to do anything like that. The equipment is s are all for adults and teenagers, by the way.  But my son is never content only to see with only seeing someone playing. He wants to join in. ed to attempt. In fact, those things might hurt him if he used them by himself. I realised I could do nothing but protected him on the equipments.

 

Great writing hitperson - and I'm glad you let him play.  That is what I do with my son two! :)

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