Human and their unhealthy activities. Reasons and solutions-VNTEST131221

As level of development grows, humans' life has become more convenient than ever before. However, <This "however" sounds strange.) On the other hand, life standard advances are undoubtedly the major culprit of many detrimental habits of human being.

A vast amount of population<-population of what? You need to repeat so the reader knows what you are taking about!!) around the world have been transforming their<--since you said "their and rural lifestyle, I assume you are taking about humans) rural lifestyle into a city-dwelling manner of living which is always under a fast pace. This requires urban residents inhabitants to constantly rush, squeeze every minute to commute everywhere. to workplace, to escort their kids to school or to meet with clients. Being on an endless flow of things to do, People easily come up with an eating disorder as they frequently skip lunch or eat too much fast food and eat dinner at super time. Furthermore, as people have to travel for business often, they can hardly maintain a regular exercising schedule. Even at on weekends, most people claim that they can not manage to go to gym centers because they need to spend time for family or other temptations like leisure activities like watching T.V. or even sleeping. for recharging the battery.

T.V is abbrev for television. If you text to someone~you can put TV

In writing, you have to put T.V. Or you can spell it all out "television."

It is of highly important that people take serious considerations on their health. It is commonplace for people to plan their work and business ahead. Similarly, People can just also plan an eating schedule every week or month or keeping a constant check-on their food absorption. In addition to work and entertainment purposes, modern technologies can be our diligent assistant who keep every records of our food consumption or numbers of our workouts. As long as humans are conscious about their health, there are a lot of tools available to help.

In conclusion, eating and exercising habits may be two of many important aspects that human beings should pay more attention as society progresses. Changing one's habit is never an easy part, yet it is the only measure if people want to healthy to achieve more in life.

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~Some people have weight gain due to bad health. Or side effects from surgeries. Or those microkillers like worms.