Jan. 04

In my home I have a cat, it's about 3 years old. It is fat, healthy, naughty and lazy. The cat in village is meant to capturing mouses, not a pet. It was so lazy even not move when the mouses pass right before it. So, the mouses in house become more and more fat and big. In this time, the weather is cold, it found some warm places to stay, for example my bed. That's not allowed. :( Anyway it can always makes itself comfortable. I think that's why it could live so long. We raise a lot of cats before, even one that works hard at capturing mouse, that one would not live above one year. The lazy ones would live longer until they made some trouble outside. However, we never keep the cats in house, let them come and go, so they never die in their old age.
Today, I found it every time I cook breakfast. The cat would capture my feet with its feet. When it becomes irritable, it even bites my feet. I can not get rid of it because of it close steps. At the end, I had to share my breakfast with it, rice noddles. :)

"She" is used to persons.

"It" is for things, included animals.

I really want to help you more but I am still a beginner too.

We can learn together little by little ;).

     My home has a cat that is about three years old. She is fat, healthy, naughty, and lazy. The cats in my village are kept for capturing mice; not as pets. This cat is so lazy that she will not even move a little bit when the mice run right in front of her, so the mice in my house have become fatter and bigger. At this time of the year, the weather is cold, and she is always looking to find some warm place to stay; my bed, for example, and that's not allowed. Anyway, she always finds a way to make herself comfortable. I think that's why she will live a long life. We have raised many cats before, and the ones that worked hard at capturing mice would not live more than one year. The lazy ones lived longer, until perhaps they got into trouble outside. We never keep pet cats in our house, anyway. We let them come and go as they please, so that they live to a ripe, old age.
     This morning I've realized that every time I cook breakfast, this cat plays with my feet. When she gets excited sometimes, she may even bite my feet. I can not get away from her; she's always underfoot. In the end, I had to share my rice noodle breakfast with her. 

     What a cute story! Your writing is improving. Remember to organize the past, present, and future tenses.