Playing with my son
My lovely son- a one-year-and-seven-month old boy - is very cute. During to the stressful work, I seldom have free time to be with him. In a normal workday, I usually get up at 7.00 am when he is still having good dream. Before I go to work at about 8,00 am, I spend the whole hour to brush up, eat breakfast and refresh some new English words sometimes. I can do nothing but have a look my sleeping boy lying in the bed before going out.
After 9 working hours, I come home finally at about 20.00 pm. It costs me more than one hour on the way home, by the way. In the hours before I go to bed, which is usually at 23.00, I am typically not free. So spending some time to play with my kid is actually a lunxry.I know it is crucially important to get together with him during this stage.
I think when I get a satisfactory score in IELTS test, I could have more spare time to do stuff i really enjoy.
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Playing with my son
My lovely son, a one-year-and-seven-month old boy, is very cute (replace the dashes with commas). During Due to the stressful work, I seldom have free time to be with him. In On a normal workday, I usually get up at 7.00 am when he is still having good dreams. Before I go to work at about 8:00 am, I spend the whole hour to brush up, eat breakfast and refresh some new English words sometimes. I can do nothing but have a look my sleeping boy lying in the bed before going out.
After 9 working hours (while this is correct, it would be more commonplace to say ""After 9 hours at work"), I come home finally at about 20.00 pm. It costs me more than one hour on the way home, by the way. In the hours before I go to bed, which is usually at 23.00, I am typically not free. So spending some time to play with my kid is actually a lunxry.I know it is crucially important to get together with him during this stage.
I think when I get a satisfactory score in IELTS test, I could have more spare time to do stuff I really enjoy.
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Playing with my son
My lovely son--a 19-month-old boy--is very cute. Due to my stressful work, I seldom have free time to be with him. In a normal workday, I usually get up at 7.00 am when he is still having good dreams. Before I go to work at about 8.00 am, I spend the whole hour to brush up, eat breakfast and sometimes refresh new English words sometimes. I can do nothing but have a look my sleeping boy lying in the bed before going out.
After 9 working hours hours at work, I come home finally at about 20.00 pm. It costs takes me more than one hour on the way home, by the way. In the hours before I go to bed, which is usually at 23.00, I am typically not free. So spending some time to play with my kid is actually a luxury. I know it is crucially important to get together with him during this stage.
I think when I get a satisfactory score in IELTS test, I could will (or could use "may") have more spare time to do stuff I really enjoy.
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I am sure your son is very cute! Spend as much time with him as you can.
We usually would say he is "one-and-a-half years old" or "nineteen months old".
Your English is quite good, I am sure you will do well on the test.
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