Poor Paul.

In the street number five, Mr.Temp and Mrs.Temp live with them their shy little shy son. His name is Paul, and Paul is a unpopular boy at his school,. wWhen Paul comes reaches home to his house and to tell talks about how his day was, Mrs.Temp doesn't care about he says, she and just wants to finish cooking to dinner. When Paul's father reaches arrive to home, Paul gets so extremely enthusiastic and happy because his father came and now, Paul can tell to him how his day at school was. But, uUnfortunately, his father doesn't care about what Paul says; and even he doesn't even look at Paul's eyes., All he just wants to do is relax and smoke a cigarettes or two cigarettes before the a hearty dinner. At 6:00 o'clock, Paul thinks sees Hhe can tell now talk about how his day was. Again, none no ones of his parentes pay attention to Paul. His mother just wants to talk about her novels and her gossipy gossip-loving neighboring, and his father just wants to talk about his boring boss. Poor little Paul, no one gonna will listen to him to say talk about the Peter, a boy at his school who everytime always/constantly beats him, or about his ugly teacher who let him in punishment punishes him [or do you mean "sends him to detention"?] simply because he is just a shy boy. :/

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Once again, I've made compulsory corrections in red, and optional improvements in blue. I'll attempt to explain some of the amendments:

"Shy little son" - I don't think there is any hard-and-fast rule for this, but it's just convention to arrange the adjectives this way when you have "little" describing a person or animal. For example, you should also say "cute little boy" or "sweet little girl" or "mischievous little kitten".

In the sentence form "X, when Y", it means "X was happening/going on, then Y suddenly happened at the same time". So remember to put a fullstop after X if you actually mean "When Y happened, Z happened"!

"Arrive", "reach", and "get" - when talking about travelling to a destination, the correct prepositions are "arrive at" or "arrive in", "reach" (no preposition), and "get" or "get to" (depending on the destination). Although it's not grammatically wrong to use "arrived at" with "home", its uncommon to do so and people usually prefer "reach".

"Talk", "tell" and "say" - "talk about (something)", "talk to (someone)"; "tell (someone) (something)", "say (something) to (someone)". I don't really know how to explain the difference on when to use which, but in general, you can "talk about" and "say" something without having a recipient, but for "tell", you need to mention the recipient (the only exception is when you "tell of", which is a slightly more complicated case).

"Want" - when you use "want" to describe an item you desire, then yep, you don't need a preposition (for example, I want a cat). When you use it to describe your intentions, however, you need to add "to" after "want" (for example, I want to cook)

Let me know if you don't understand what I'm saying, hahah :)