The first day in 2014
Today it's the first day in 2014. It was sunny , I went shopping with my colleagues--Emily and Julie .We almost went over the whole shopping mall and finally I bought a down coat and one overcoat. It could be a wonderful day today.But my cellphone was stold on my way back home.Lost cellphone is not a big deal, what I care about most is that all infomation and document in my cellphone I don't have a copy :((((((
I feel very frustrate now.
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The First Day of (in) 2014
Today was (it's) the first day of (in) 2014. It was sunny and (,) I went shopping with my colleagues--Emily and Julie .We covered almost (went over) the whole shopping mall until (and) finally I bought a down coat and an (one) overcoat. It could have been (be) a wonderful day today (.) but my cellphone was stolen (stold) on my way back home. Although a lost cellphone is not a big deal, what I care about most is that all my infomation and documentation was in my cellphone and I didn't keep copies. (have don't have a copy) :((((((
I feel very frustrated now.
Sorry to hear this. I hope things get better for you, Stella.
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