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I hate winter damn it hell "it's bugging me calling me and twisting me around yeah I'm endlessly caving in and turning inside out ..." Muse Again this damn winter . God for what me that punishment? this four fucking cold months ! and therefore 121 days with a minus sign ... minus a good mood , joy minus the sun, minus light clothing and warm lap . Less ease of movement . Minus charm of twilight and dawn. Hopeless time . And why with all that crap in my 125 , I am still living in the eastern part of the country ? I think I know the answer ... It's all because I did not ask Santa for ever moving to a warm part of the world . Last year I asked as he could to help me with my English. Well, he helped me learn 1500 words. So, in short , Santa you understood my hint? these gray days deduce from itself me!! I want to live in Florida already original thought) Снова эта чёртова зима. Боже за что мне это наказание? это четыре долбаных месяца холода! а значит 121 день со знаком минус... минус хорошее настроение, минус радость солнцу, минус лёгкая одежда и теплые колени. Минус лёгкость передвижения. Минус очарование сумерек и рассвета. Безнадёжное время. И почему со всем этим дерьмом в свои 125 я до сих пор живу в восточной части страны?! Кажется я знаю ответ... Это всё потому, что я не просила у Санты переезда в вечно теплую часть света. В прошлом году я просила чтобы он как мог помог бы мне с английским. Ну он помог мне выучить 1500 слов. Так, короче, Санта ты понял мой намёк? Меня выводят из себя эти серые дни! Хочу жить во Флориде уже!

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I hate winter - damn it, hell

"It's bugging me
calling me
and twisting me around

Yeah I'm endlessly
caving in
and turning inside out ..." Muse
Again this damn winter. God, for what do I deserver this punishment? These four fucking cold months!  And therefore, 121 days with a minus sign ... minus a good mood, joy minus the sun, minus light clothing and warm lap . Less ease of movement . Minus charm of twilight and dawn. Hopeless time. And why with all that crap in my 125, since I am still living in the eastern part of the country? I think I know the answer ... It's all because I did not ask Santa to always move to a warm part of the world . Last year I asked if he could to help me with my English. Well, he helped me learn 1500 words. So, in short, Santa, you understood my hint? From these gray days, I can deduce the answer me!! I want to live in Florida already.

original thought)
Снова эта чёртова зима. Боже за что мне это наказание? это четыре долбаных месяца холода! а значит 121 день со знаком минус... минус хорошее настроение, минус радость солнцу, минус лёгкая одежда и теплые колени. Минус лёгкость передвижения. Минус очарование сумерек и рассвета. Безнадёжное время. И почему со всем этим дерьмом в свои 125 я до сих пор живу в восточной части страны?! Кажется я знаю ответ... Это всё потому, что я не просила у Санты переезда в вечно теплую часть света. В прошлом году я просила чтобы он как мог помог бы мне с английским. Ну он помог мне выучить 1500 слов. Так, короче, Санта ты понял мой намёк? Меня выводят из себя эти серые дни! Хочу жить во Флориде уже!

 

[Good work.   Remember that there is no space before periods and commas, just after.  You also might want to be careful about using f**k.  It is quite vulgar, though I admit there are times where it has a place.]

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I hate winter, damn it hell!

"It's bugging me, calling me and twisting me around! Yeah, I'm endlessly caving in and turning inside out" - Muse


Again this damn winter . God, what have I done to deserve this for what me that punishment? These four fucking cold months have been fucking cold! and therefore 121 days with a minus sign ... minus a good mood, joy minus the sun, minus light clothing and without a warm lap. There is less ease of movement in winter. There is no Minus charm of twilight and dawn. It is a hopeless time. I ask myself why after And why with all this crap in my 125, I am still living in the eastern part of the country!? I think I know the answer ... It's all because I did not ask Santa to move me for ever moving to a warm part of the world. Last year I asked if as he could to help me with my English. Well, he helped me learn 1500 words. So, in short, Santa you understood my hint (or "you've heard me?")? these gray days are coming from myself deduce from itself me!! I want to live in Florida already.

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Hope spring comes soon! As others have said, cussing can be important if you want to express frustration - like in this bit of writing. Be aware of your audience though, it's generally not acceptable to use the word f*ck in polite company, with strangers or a professional environment ;) but fine with friends. 

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I use as many expletives as I need) thnx
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I hope you know you are using a lot of swear words --- it is not a good idea.

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