george's notebook entry: Nov 13, 2010
今天晚上想去哪里玩？
明天想出去玩吗？
你想喝点什么？
你长得像我的表妹。
你跳得好。
我能陪你一起到老吗？
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george's notebook entry: Nov 13, 2010
今天晚上想去哪里玩？
明天想出去玩吗？
你想喝点什么？
你长得像我的表妹,
你舞跳得好，
我能陪你一起到老吗？
Your Chinese is good！ but you should pay more attention on Chinese punctuation ,maybe our Chinese is too diffierent to study, most foreigners can not grasp its punctuation well, to tett your the truth ,many Chinese also think our mother tongue is too hard,to.
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Very good!
我能陪你一起到老吗？ is quite great.
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最后一句亮了~
the last sentences is geliable.
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good!
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