Would you please correct this introduction for my profile?

Hello everybody :)
I'm an Italian student and a language fanatic and my goal is to achieve fluency in a great number of languages. My favourite ones are English and German, but I also like Spanish, Japanese and Germanic languages in general.
As far as English is concerned I have already taken the Fce exam and would like to attend the C1 course at my school. I'm waiting for the results of the entry test. Of course, being a passionate learner, I stretch myself beyond what they normally teach in school, so I usually watch movies and read books, but still don't have a decent fluency. Therefore, here I will be mainly be focusing on my speaking ability.
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Would you please correct this introduction for my profile?

Hello everybody :)
I'm an Italian student and a language fanatic and my goal is to achieve fluency in a great deal of languages. My favourite ones are English and German, but I also like Spanish, Japanese and Germanic languages in general.
As far as English is concerned I have already taken the Fce exam and would like to attend the C1 course at my school. (I'm waiting for the results of the entry test). Of course, being a passionate learner, I stretch myself beyond what they normally teach in school so I usually watch movies and read books but still don't have a decent fluency therefore (here) I will be mainly focusing on my speaking ability here.
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No mistakes really, just a typo and I'd put "here" at the end of the sentence for fluency...though it's not a mistake for it to remain where you put it.

Hello everybody :) 

I'm an Italian student and a language fanatic, and my goal is to achieve fluency in a great deal of (many/several/a ton of) languages. My favourite languages are English and German, but I also like Spanish, Japanese and some other Germanic languages in general.
As far as English is concerned, I have already taken the Fce exam and would like to attend the C1 course at my school. (I'm waiting for the results of the entry test (entrance exam)). Of course, being a passionate learner, I stretch myself beyond what they normally teach in school; for example, I often watch movies and read books. but (however) I still don't have a decent fluency, and so here I will be focusing mainly on my speaking ability.