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see a doctor Today is Monday. I waked up at 7am and have porridge and steamed bum for breakfest. The weather is very nice anyway also very clod today. I had a little cold and cough recently and then I decided to see a doctor.There are so many people in the hospital when I arrived.It will turn to me in the afternoon.So I am sitting in a KFC nearby the hospital to wait for my turn now.

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see a doctor

Today is Monday. I waked  WOKE up at 7am and have HAD porridge and steamed bum BUNS OR A STEAMED BUN for breakfest. The weather TODAY is very nice anyway AND or BUT also very clod CLOUDY  today. I HAVE had a little cold and cough recently and then I decided to see a doctor.There WERE  so many people in the hospital when I arrived.It will BE MY turn to me TO SEE THE DOCTOR in the afternoon.So I am sitting in a KFC nearby the hospital to wait for my turn now.

 



VERY GOOD  . I made a few suggestions.  You look here to learn about past tense

http://esl.about.com/library/quiz/blgrquiz_pastforms.htm

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I suggest you find propolis and chew (very much like chewing-gum) a small amount, like one gramme, until it dissolves slowly in your saliva. It will take hours and during all that time propolis will act as an antiseptic and will help you recover from your cough. Propolis is natural. It occurs in honey bees hives, it is used by them as a cement or a plaster. I always try to have, say, half an once to go through the winter.
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see a doctor

Today is Monday. I waked up at 7am and have porridge and steamed bum for breakfest. The weather is very nice anyway also it's very cloudy today. I had a little cold and cough recently and then I decided to see a doctor.There were (are you talking about the past) are so many people in the hospital when I arrived.It will turn to me in until the afternoon.So I am sitting in a KFC nearby the hospital to waiting for my turn now.

 

Good. ¿What time is it where you're now? Waiting since around 7 am to the afternoon is a lot of time left to be attended by the doctor?, in Mexico still is Sunday 9:13 pm

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