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see a doctor
Today is Monday. I waked WOKE up at 7am and have HAD porridge and steamed bum BUNS OR A STEAMED BUN for breakfest. The weather TODAY is very nice anyway AND or BUT also very clod CLOUDY today. I HAVE had a little cold and cough recently and then I decided to see a doctor.There WERE so many people in the hospital when I arrived.It will BE MY turn to me TO SEE THE DOCTOR in the afternoon.So I am sitting in a KFC nearby the hospital to wait for my turn now.
VERY GOOD . I made a few suggestions. You look here to learn about past tense
http://esl.about.com/library/quiz/blgrquiz_pastforms.htm
see a doctor
Today is Monday. I waked up at 7am and have porridge and steamed bum for breakfest. The weather is very nice anyway also it's very cloudy today. I had a little cold and cough recently and then I decided to see a doctor.There were (are you talking about the past) are so many people in the hospital when I arrived.It will turn to me in until the afternoon.So I am sitting in a KFC nearby the hospital to waiting for my turn now.
Good. ¿What time is it where you're now? Waiting since around 7 am to the afternoon is a lot of time left to be attended by the doctor?, in Mexico still is Sunday 9:13 pm
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