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Hi everyone Hi! I want to improve my english and I hope this website can help me with this. I'm a visual artist and I'm from Brazil. I work with photography and performance. I like to dance and watch movies. I usually go to the cinema once a week. I love music too. I can say that this is one of my favorites and loved things in life. I hope to do an exchange in the future. I don't know when I will can do that because is too expensive and I need a lot of money but I believe someday I'll get there.

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I usually go to cinema once a week. The article "the" is not required as "the cinema" here as it is a general condition.
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Hi everyone

Hi! I want to improve my English and I hope this website can help me with this goal.
I'm a visual artist and I'm from Brazil. I work with in photography and performance. I like to dance and watch movies. I usually go to the cinema once a week. I love music, too. I can say that this is one of my favorites and most loved things in life.
I hope to do an student exchange in the future. I don't know when I will can do that because is too quite expensive and I need a lot of money. Nevertheless,  but I believe someday I'll get there.

 

 

Great effort. You use some really nice phrases and it reads well. Keep it up!

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Hi everyone

Hi! I want to improve my english and I hope this website can help me with this.
I'm a visual artist and I'm from Brazil. I work with photography and performance. I like to dance, and watch movies. I usually go to the cinema once a week, I love music too. I can say that this is one of my favorite things to do in my life.
I hope to do an exchange in the future. I don't know when I can do that because  it is too expensive and I need a lot of money but I believe someday I'll get there.

 

you did good with this paragraph just a few small errors.

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