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朋友 A conversartion between two friends 林娜,你好。 你好,陆雨平。那是谁哪里? 那是我的姐姐。你有兄弟姐妹吗 我有一个咩咩和二弟弟。 我的姐姐是语言学院的学生。我不认识她。 我不认识她。 我来介绍一下。 Hello Lin Na Hi Lu Yuping. Who is that over there? That is my older sister. Do you have any siblings? I have one younger sister and two younger brothers. My older sister is at student at Yuyan College. Do you know her? No I don't. I'll introduce you.

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朋友 A conversartion between two friends

林娜,你好。
你好,陆雨平。那是谁哪里?    在那里的是? or 那是?
那是我的姐姐。你有兄弟姐妹吗? 
我有一个咩咩 妹妹 mèi 和二 个gè 弟弟。 (or 俩liǎng 弟弟)
我的姐姐是语言学院的学生。我不认识她。 你认识她吗?
我不认识她。
我来给你(with or without both be ok) 介绍一下。


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朋友 A conversartion between two friends

林娜,你好。
你好,陆雨平。那是谁哪里? 在那裏的是誰?
那是我的姐姐。你有兄弟姐妹吗
我有一个咩咩妹妹和二个弟弟。
我的姐姐是语言学院的学生。我不认识她。 你认识她吗?
我不认识她。
我来介绍一下。


Hello Lin Na
Hi Lu Yuping. Who is that over there?
That is my older sister. Do you have any siblings?
I have one younger sister and two younger brothers.
My older sister is at student at Yuyan College. Do you know her?
No I don't.
I'll introduce you.

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朋友 A conversartion between two friends

林娜,你好。
你好,陆雨平。在那里的人是谁?
那是我的姐姐。你有其他兄弟姐妹吗
我有一个妹妹和两个弟弟。
我的姐姐是语言学院的学生。你认识他吗?
我不认识她。
我会给你介绍的。


Hello Lin Na
Hi Lu Yuping. Who is that over there?
That is my older sister. Do you have any siblings?
I have one younger sister and two younger brothers.
My older sister is at student at Yuyan College. Do you know her?
No I don't.
I'll introduce you.

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Hi Anne, it's so great that you begin to write in Chinese!!! Andrew's correction is really detailed:)
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sorry made a mistake in my correction,'' I have one younger sister and two younger brothers '' could be translated to'我有一个妹妹和两个弟弟 'or‘我有一妹两弟’, 二er for No. like 二号-no.2,十二-twelve, use 两liǎng

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