A Journey Of the Young Soulla. Part 1, Awakening

"Is it real?" - the young Soulla thought. "Strange". Everything seems to be the same, but something elusive had changed.
Young Soulla was shocked at the piercing reality which surrounded her.
She felt an increase in ability to comprehend every second,  hearing complete silence.
She could recall the old memories, but something almost fleeting, invisible for the other eyes, had changed.
It was a damage to her old and stable life, and she couldn't retreat. Becoming afraid of a new coming into her life, Soulla tried to restore damaged walls, but the more she tried, the more it was turning into a rubble.
"It beats me. This silence is so unbearably loud. I can't concentrate on anything. I want to come back, where everything is so familiar, where everything is predictable, and nothing could happen to shake my existence!" - she said.

It is typical of a new awakened soul. She shall be OK okay, she just needs some time and courage to look inside yourself herself acknowledging her own strength and energy.

She was empty. All her life, she was expected to be a good person saying the right words, thinking the right thoughts, doing the right things. But here, in this moment, she couldn't discern what is good, what is bad, what is right, what is wrong. What for some people is good, for others might be not be so good. She remembered how she had tried to change her friend's opinion by obtruding ??? her thoughts, thinking how everyone lived wrong. If she only knew how her opinion and stereotypes would change, and that she would understand that all people had their own path, even if it didn't coincide with her's.
She felt herself trembling, but here nobody could warm her, here she was by herself.
"Nobody but me... I wish I were in my bed sleeping" - she thought covering her face from blinding sun.

To be continued...

You don't need the hyphens ( - ) between dialog and text.

Missing the usual pesky articles!

'turning into rubble'  Here we don't need the article! I don't know the rule. Rubble is like plural rocks.

'for some people ... for others'   Plural, like saying 'for other people'

her's is possessive, meaning 'her path'

I added some commas. They are for pauses in speech.

Wow, a very strong piece of writing! And no verb or sentence problems, impressive, Anna!