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Hot, hot, hot!
Oh, dear God! It's incredibly hot in here Blumenau! This isn't normal for me [I'm not used to this heat]. Where I live, the temperature climate is comfortable, and the hottest [warmest] days are absolutely not [nothing] like what I'm living through here right now. In addition, there is no air conditioning [available here], just an old fan. But We're solving the problem on the [this] weekend, because we're going to buy an air conditioner. Then all it's going to get pretty everything should be much better. It's just too hard [hot] to have to work, study, do the housework, and any other thing anythong else this way. Even the "cold water" in the shower is hot. I have the impression that I'm like cookies feel like a cookie baking in the an oven, see? See what hot temperatures are this heat is doing to me? I'm normally not annoying a complainer like this; well at least I really don't think I am, so but who knows? Well, I think I'll just come back here to write again when I have the air conditioner working.
Very good, Else! I provided synomyms for you, and adjusted various phrases for readability. Stay cool!
Hot, hot, hot!
OMG! (More commonly used abbreviation - can be used to say "Oh My God", "Oh My Goodness", "Oh My Gosh") It's incredibly hot in Blumenau. This isn't normal for me, for from where I come the temperature is comfortable, and the hottest days were absolutely not like what I'm experiencing here right now. In addition, there are no air conditioning facilities here, but just an old fan. But we'll be solving the problem on the weekend, as we're going to buy an air conditioning system. Then hopefully it's going to get pretty much better. It's just too hard to have to work, study, do the housework, and any other thing in the present situation/condition. Even the cold shower produces hot water! I feel like as if I'm a cookie in an oven. Get it? You see what hot temperatures are doing to my mind? I'm not annoying like this (well, at least I really don't think so...but who knows?). Well, I think I'll just come back here to write again when I have the air conditioning system...
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Hot, hot, hot!
Oh dear my god! It's incredibly hot in Blumenau. This isn't normal for me, where I live the temperature is more comfortable, and the hottest days are absolutely not like what I'm living feeling here right now. In addition, there is no air conditioning, just an old fan. But we're solving the problem on the weekend, we're going to buy an air conditioner. Then all it's going to get pretty much better. It's just too hard have hot to work, study, do the housework, and or any other thing this way. Even the cold shower is hot. I have the impression that I'm like cookies in the oven. See? See what hot temperatures are doing to me? I'm not annoying like this (well, at least I really don't think so...but who knows?). Well, I think I'll just come back here to write again when after I have the air conditioning...
Very good! I like the title "Hot, hot, hot!". Think cool thoughtsl!!
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