Working in the office is better

Since the information age has come, internet technology has penetrated into every aspect of our life, which makes working at home come into reality. However,I believe never will this way of working will never replace the traditional one.
Nowadays,many people show affection for working at home because of its comfort and convenience. It’s beyond doubt that it does save time. Yet,don’t you think it’s too comfortable to work? Home is a place to relax, where you can feel warm and at easel. Just imagining that you’re working in your room when laughter of the family and smells of delicious food come in through the crack of the door, can you still focus on your work?
On the contrary, compared with working at home, working in the office has obvious advantages. Firstly,the face-to-face communication is inevitable when you work in office .I guess a team is supposed to have its unique spirit, which is passed to every member through daily communication. Secondly,working together in an office can create an atmosphere where everyone can feel he or she is a part of the team. In particular, when you work in office with a colleague,y ou can have a better understanding of what he is up to, which will improve your coorperation. Also,the mistakes and shortcomings can be pointed out in time.
In summary,as far as I’m concerned that working in the office is better than working at home.

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