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Better Life in the City As the economy is developing at a high speed,urbanization never slows down its pace.In China,more and more peasants send their children and grandchildren to cities.Why?Because city has advantage over country in many aspects. First of all,in the matter of accommodation,citizens have more access to high-quality foods and communities equipped with advanced security system.On the contrary,illeagal operating is general in countries,which leads to that the quality of foods isn’t guaranteed.Also,thanks to the backward of security system,crime rate is quite high in countries.In addition to the advantage in accommodation,it can’t be denied that city can provide us with better education,which is of vital importance to a person.Due to the limit of geographic position,the most advanced education can’t get to countries even today,when the traffic system is quite developed. However,we do can’t turn a blind eye to the advantages of countries.When it comes to country life,the words”peaceful”、”beautiful”、and”easeful”flash in our minds.There is no doubt that countries are more close to nature and it is beautiful.But as far as I’m concerned,it’s easy to find a park or a garden in cities,where you can leave everything behind and hug the nature too.So I believe that there is a kind of unique beauty in cities,which combines the charm of humanity and nature.As to peace and ease,I guess they are among the things which you get only afer you fighting.They don’t just belong to country.It’s up to you if you can own them. In summary,cities,according to the situation now,are more suitable to live than countries.

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Your argument was meaningful but your construction of words and sentences were really bad. There were certain errors i did not expect to see. Errors such as country in place of rural areas was disappointing but in all you did your best work. I hope you do not give up but continue to learn hard.

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