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I wanna become a good English speaker in the near future!!!!!
Hello,everyone! My name is Taro. I like playing a game whose name iscalled Ameba-pigg which is very famous and popular in Japan. There are a lot of foreigners playing this game (as well). By interacting with this players from all over the world, I can learn foreign languages like Indonesian , English and so on. I'm neither a student nor a worker. I have a will/I plan/I want to enter the local university to study medicine. I'd like to become a medical researcher in the future. I've never been abroad, so when I become able to speak fluent in English fluently, I wanna travel around the world and study about the world affairs. Now I live in the Toyama Prefecture which is located in the north part of Japan island. The city is near the sea, so it's very cold here. Toyama city has a good command of view of nature and there is a lot of clear water. the Fishes are very delicious,too!!! If you come to Japan, you should visit the Toyama Prefecture and enjoy yourself. Thanks for you reading!
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I wanna become a good English speaker in the near future!!!!!
Hello,everyone ! My name is Taro. I like playing a game called Ameba-pigg which is very famous and popular in Japan. There are a lot of foreigners playing this game. By interacting with this player from all over the world,I can learn foreign languages like Indonesia , English and so on. I'm neither a student nor a worker. I plan to enter the local university to study medicine. I'd like to become a medical researcher in the future. I've never been abroad, so when I become fluent in English, I wanna travel around the world and study aboutworld affairs. Now I live in the Toyama Prefecture which is located in the north part of Japan. The city is near the sea, so it's very cold here. Toyama city has a good view of nature and there is a lot of clear water. The fishes are very delicious,too!!! If you come to Japan, you should visit the Toyama Prefecture and enjoy yourself. Thanks for reading!
I wanna become a good English speaker in the near future!!!!!
Hello,everyone ! My name is Taro. I like playing a game dalled Ameba-pigg which is very famous and popular in Japan. There are a lot of foreigners playing this game. By interacting with foreigners from all over the world,I can learn foreign languages like Indonesia , English and so on. I'm neither a student nor a worker. I plan to enter the local university to study medicine. I'd like to become a medical researcher in the future. I've never been abroad, so when I become fluent in English, I wanna travel around the world and study about world affairs. Now I live in the Toyama Prefecture which is located in the north part of Japan. The city is near the sea, so it's very cold here. Toyama city has a good view of nature and there is a lot of clear water. The fishes are very delicious,too!!! If you come to Japan, you should visit the Toyama Prefecture and enjoy yourself. Thanks for reading!
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