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Dear Mr. Bossman:
I would be extremely am interested in the job your company is looking for a trainee the administrative assistant trainee position that your company has advertised.
The leadership and teamwork displayed by your departments during my visit last week has made quite a good impression on me. The complexity of the teamwork displayed by your different departments, and how they can well they work together doing their best impressed me
I am writing to you to thank you for your attention during the hosting my visit I could enjoy in your company the last week. It was really interesting just to see all .
as I am in my least year of a Business Administration student at University X, due to graduate in the month of ________ and I am looking for training and excited to start to work my career.
I am really into business and administration deals- I am a very well organized, responsible, and hard-working person. I specially love the challenges and always see them through in an efficient manner. demanding jobs .I am responsible an hard worked, and it is my best satisfaction when my work is well done.
It would be nice if I could start my career in your company.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely
Thank you for considering my resumé.
Regards,
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Dear Mr. ,
I am writing to thank you for your attention during my visit to your company the last week. I was really interested to see the complexity of the different departments and how well they worked together, to produce such good results.
I am extremely interested in the position of Trainee Administration Assistant that your company has advertised. I am in the final year of my bachelor's degree in Business and Administration studies and am seeking a trainee position to commence my career.
I am really interested in business and administration. I'm very well-organized and especially relish new responsibilities, challenges and demanding projects. I am concientious and hard-working, taking great pride and satisfaction in the knowledge that my work is done well and to the best of my ability.
I would consider it a wonderful opportunity to be able to start my career with your company.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
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