Chinese festival
The winter solstice is one of the Chinese festival. Most of people eat dumplings at this day,I think it is delicious .Today my roommates and i bought a lot of dumplings and we Cooking in the dormitory .Chunlan cooking, Xiaonan boiled dumplings, and soup,what a happy day today!
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Chinese festival
The winter solstice is one of the Chinese festivals. Most people eat dumplings on at this day, and I think they are delicious. Today my roommates and I bought a lot of dumplings and we cooked them in the dormitory. Chunlan cooking, Xiaonan boiled dumplings, and soup, what a happy day today!
There is a problem with the sentence beginning "most people". This is because "they" could refer to most people rather than dumplings giving a very odd meaning!
It might be better to turn the sentence around.
I think the dumplings, which many people eat on this day, are delicious.
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