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Hello everyone,I'm new one here. Hi everyone, One of my friends told me about this italki some days ago,I just logged in today.:)Wish I can improve my English and learn German well here,and also make some good friends here!Seem everyone likes learning languages,exchange languages must be very interesting ^_^ Maybe I should introduce myself:I'm Demi from Chongqing,China.My city is the largest city in the world,though many people have never ever heard it.It's a mountain city and some interesting famous stuffs.I will write an article about Chongqing later. And I think I'm a kind-hearted,polite girl.I like traveling,reading,writing,watching movies,playing harmonica,singing,listening to music,spicy food or other delicious food,board games, etc What are your hobbies? Wish I can make good friends here and learn different cultures too!^_^ Thanks for reading, Demi

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Hello everyone, I'm new one here.

Hi everyone,
One of my friends told me about this italki some days ago, and I just logged in today.:)Wish I hope I can improve my English and learn German well here, and also make some good friends here! It seems everyone likes learning languages, so exchanging languages must be very interesting ^_^
Maybe I should introduce myself: I'm Demi from Chongqing, China. My city is the largest city in the world, though many people have never ever heard of it. It's a mountain city and has some interesting and famous points of interest. I will write an article about Chongqing later.
And I think I'm a kind-hearted, polite girl. I like traveling, reading, writing, watching movies, playing harmonica,singing, listening to music, spicy food or other delicious food, board games, etc.
What are your hobbies? I hope I can make good friends here and learn different cultures too!^_^
Thanks for reading,
Demi

 

[Very good start. Remember to put a space after all periods and commas.  'Wish' was correct in your sentences, but we use 'hope' more often to describe a goal that we want to achieve.  I look forward to seeing more of you entries.]

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Hi Demi, I play harmonic too and I'm music teatcher. If you wanna talk I'm here, see you
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Hi demi. I'm Naomi! I am also new here and I am learning English. I would like to keep practicing my English and advanced English and I knew I forgot a lot. If you keep practicing your English you can talk me via DM.

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