Crime and punishment reading thanks

Today , I was reading a book titled "Crime and Punishment", which was written by Dostoevsky, a very famous Russian writer. I always have been interested in Russian literature, so when I saw the book on the library shelf, it immediately it caught my attention .

The book tells us a story about a young man called Rodin who lives in St Petersburg. He is far away from his family, studying at the university, but suddenly he has no money, so to survive , he has had to pawn many things. His moneylender is Anita, a thin women with her hair green and sharp nose, about sixty, whom he hates so much because he thinks that she is making wealth at the cost of people suffering. After all, he is a poor student who doesn’t deserve what is happening to him …..
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[Good job.  Don't put together so many phrases just separated by commas - shorten them into sentences.  Also, when you are telling the plot of a book or movie, it is usually given in the present tense.  You might have told it in the past, but then all your tenses would be past tense.]

Crime and punishment reading thanks

Today , I was reading a book called Crime and Punishment which was written by Dostoevsky a very famous Russian writer , I have always have been interested in Russian literature so when I saw the book on the library shelf , immediately it caught my attention .

The book tells us a story about a young man called Rodin who lives in St Petersburg’s , he is far away from his family , studying at the university but suddenly he has no money, so to survive  he has had to pawn many things. His moneylender was/is Anita a thin women with her hair green and a sharp nose ,about sixty, whom he hates so much because  she is making herself rich at cost of people suffering . After all he is a poor student who doesn’t deserve what is happening to him …..
To be continued

Well wriiten Sandra, you only have a few small mistakes. 

Kind regards