First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm Michelle, I like English when I was young . I leant English many years but it's not good. This time I want to improve my English so I come to UK to study six months .

I'm Michelle.  I liked English when I was young.  I have been learning English for many years, but I am not good. (or I tried to learn English many years ago, but it did not work.) This time I want to improve my English so I can come to the UK to study for six months.

Good job.  Keep practicing!