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Being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? In our modern society, the eager of being famous appears increasingly among the younsters. Many of them insist that being a celebrity brings more benefits than problems. The others, however, are holding the opposite view. Admittedly, being a celebrity, whatever a famous film star or sports personality, has lots of advantages for themselves. If succeeded, he/she can be able to obtain more resources than before. For example, they are easier to earn an amount of money, also have more opportunities to access the headlines of mass media, and purchase more expensive accommodations. In addition, their family members and friends also obtain more chance to success. Actually, it is common to find that there are numerous famous singers are relatives,such as Janet Jackson and her elder brother-Michal Jackson. Last but not the least, they have more sufficient ability to contribute to their society, whatever by themselvs or by advocating other people. In other words,they are more powerful on charity. On the negative side, celebrities also have their own problems, Personally, they always have to work overtime, so that they do not have enough time to share with their families. This means they are facing more complex family problems than us. Even if a little tiny domestic affair accurs, it would be reported as a huge scandal or an amusement material. For the society, the negative behaviors of celebrities will disappoit their funs, This leads to younsters are confused increasingly. They do not know who they should trust and how they should do, It could take many years to cure themselves. In conclusion, it is an unavoidable tendancy that more and more people persue fames and status. Even though this brings more benefits than problems, it is also suggested to focus on how to minimize the negative effects of being celebrities. ------------- Thank you for your correction here !

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 Does Being a celebrity bring more benefits or more problems?

In our modern society, the eagerness of being famous appears to be increasing among the younsters. Many of them insist that being a celebrity brings more benefits than problems. The others, however, have the opposite view.

Famous film stars and sports personalities admit that being a celebrity has many advantages. If he or she succeeds, it enables them to obtain more resources than before. For example, they have an easier time earning a larger amount of money.  This means they have more opportunities to access the headlines of mass media, and to purchase more expensive accommodations. In addition, their family members and friends also have more chance to succeed.  It is common to find that numerous famous singers are relatives, such as Janet Jackson and her elder brother-Michal Jackson. Last, but not least, they have a more sufficient ability to contribute to society, whether by themselves or by advocating other people. In other words, they have  more influence on charity.

On the negative side celebrities also have their own problems.  For example, they always have to work overtime.  Because of this, they do not have enough time to spend with their families. This means they face more complex family problems than us. Even if a little tiny domestic affair accurs, it would be reported as a huge scandal or for amusement material. For society, the negative behaviors of celebrities will disappoint their fans.  This leads to younsters being confused increasingly. They do not know who they can trust or how they should act.  It can take many years to reverse the process.

In conclusion, it is an unavoidable tendancy that more and more people pursue fame and status. Even though this can bring more benefits than problems, it is suggested that people focus on how to minimize the negative effects of being a celebrity.


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