year end party
It is almost near the end of the year 2013.And we had a year end party in this week.All of my colleagues and our team leader came to a good restaurant and we ate dinner together.It was so much fun that everyone enjoy the food and drank a lot of wine.
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Yyear-end party
It is almost near the end of the year 2013. And wWe had a year-end party in this week. All of my colleagues and our team leader came with me to a good restaurant and we ate dinner together. It was so much fun; that everyone enjoyed the food and drank a lot of wine.
Good writing. I crossed out 'that' because the second part of the sentence was not a consequence of the first part.
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year end party
It is almost/nearly (you don't need both nearly and almost) the end of the year 2013, and so we had a year end/year-end (either one is acceptable, but I prefer year-end) party in this week. All of my colleagues and our team leader came went to a good restaurant and we ate had dinner together. It was so much fun and that everyone enjoyed the food and drank a lot of wine.
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year end party
It is almost near the end of the year 2013.And we had a year end party in this week.All of my colleagues and our team leader came went to the a good restaurant,and we ate a dinner together.It was so much fun, that everyone enjoyed the food and drank a lot of wine.
Hope you had a great time!! :)
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