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My first day on this website Hi everybody, It's the first time I use this website. I'm here because I'd like to improve my writing. Thanks everybody for your help. I studied English for a lots of years in France but the result was not great. When I was at the university I decides to study English more seriously and to improve my speaking. During several years I practiced my speaking in France and now I live in London. My next goal is to improve my writing, so I suppose I will have to open a grammar book....

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Your writing is pretty good, and I'm happy to see you used the American spelling for "practiced." I'd just like to add that as a general rule, "a lot of" means the same as "lots of." Notice that when we says "lots," we don't use the indefinite article, but when we say "lot," we do. However, when referring to units of time, it's better to say "many." (A native speaker might use "a lot of" or "lots of," but it would be very informal.)
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My first day on this website

 

Hi everybody,

This is the first time I've used this website. I'm here because I'd like to improve my writing.

Thanks everybody for your help.

 

I studied English for a lots of many years in France but the result was not great. When I was at the university I decided to study English more seriously and to improve my speaking.


Over several years I practised my speaking in France, and now I live in London.

My next goal is to improve my writing, so I suppose I will have to open a grammar book...

 

Well, I think you should write a little more and find out what is missing in your English skills. You do need to check your use of present perfect, to begin with.


Good luck.

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My first day on this website

Hi everybody,
It's the first time I use This is the first time using this website. I'm here because I'd like to improve my writing.
Thanks everybody for your help.
I studied English for a lots of years many years in France but the result was not great. When I was at the university I decides decided to study English more seriously and to improve my speaking.
During For several years I practiced my speaking in France and now I live in London.
My next goal is to improve my writing, so I suppose I will have to open a grammar book....

 

 

Good luck with your writing practice! Your writing isn't bad!

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