Bad weather

Today,<<>>Shanghai had been in the heavey rain.<<>>In the morning,<<>>it made traffic jam.<<>>Therefore,<<>>many people took the subway.<<>>At the subway station, there were very crowed.<<>>So that I_couldn't breathe and move in subway. Everyone was very irritable and impatient.<<>>What a lousy morning!<<>>What a terrible weather!

Three days ago, you heard "Don't forget the space and keep trying ^^>" But you still forget the space.

I also and only underline "the space" here.

Bad weather

Today, Shanghai had been in the heavey heavy rain. In the morning, it made caused traffic jams. Therefore, many people took the subway. At the subway station, there were very crowed it was very crowded...so crowded that I couldn't breathe and or move in subway on the train. Everyone was very irritable and impatient. What a lousy morning! What a terrible weather!

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