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My grandma If I could be anyone for a day. I wish to become my grandmother, because I really admire for her wit, hard work, care and kindness. Fristly, I want to tell her wit. She is seventy-two years old. She is old but she uses a computer and a smart phone for entertainment very well. She is the best computer user our family. She is very thoughful. I remember when I was young. She took me to go to supermarket. She chose all of the best food and fruit, here. When we went home, I opened them to eat. It was delicious and wonderful. All of food and fruit who bought, surpass always what that I am expected. From then on, I admire her a lot. Secondly, my grandmother is hard-working. Although she was retired, she still helped family by helping her daughter such as getting up early to go to her daughter’s hospital and worked there until three hours. She managed all of workers and finance professionally in the hospital. Then she went home and relaxed. She still continued working housework. For example, she cooked dinner for her family and cleaned the house. I have to learn from her so much. Next, she is not only hard-working but also cares for all people in her family. When I was sick, she took me to go to the hospital. She took care me by heart so I loved her so much. When I did not have money, she gave me a lot of money to buy everything I needed. She gave not only me but also people. I remember that I went out with my closefriend on last Christmas then I lately went home. When I entered my home, my grandmother was waiting me then she shouted me and taught me a lesson. I knew she wasn’t angry me but she was worried about me. After she finished teaching me, she cooked repast at night for me. One day, we went eat at an expensive restaurant with our family. When I was eating, she granted me the best food. To sum up, my grandmother knows ways how to take care of anyone. Finally, she is very kind. In her life, she never talked behind anyone’s back. Everyone believed her. She liked to share food and clothes for the poor. She gave the poor money because the poor were in need of many things so she donated money to charitable funds. She always treats everone very well and is friendly. All about things make me admire and love my grandmother so much. I want to become a person like my grandmother.

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My grandma

If I could be anyone for a day. I would wish to become my grandmother, because I really admire for her wit, hard work, care and kindness.
Fristly, I want to tell talk about her wit. She is seventy-two years old. She is old but she uses a computer and a smart phone for entertainment very well. She is the best computer user in our family. She is very thoughful. I remember when I was young, she took me to go to the supermarket. She chose all of the best food and fruit, here. When we went home, I opened them to eat. It was delicious and wonderful. All of the food and fruit who she bought, always surpassed that what which I am expected. From then on, I admired her a lot. 

Secondly, my grandmother is hard-working. Although she was retired, she still helped family by helping her daughter, such as getting up early to go to her daughter’s hospital and worked there until three hours o'clock. She managed all of workers and finance professionally in the hospital. Then she went would go home and relax. She would still continue working, doing housework. For example, she would cooked dinner for her family and cleaned the house. I have so much to learn from her. 

Next, she is not only hard-working but also cares for all people everyone in her family. When I was sick, she took me to go to the hospital. She took such loving care of me. I loved her so much. When I did not have money, she gave me a lot of money to buy everything I needed. She not only gave money to me but also to other people. I remember that I went out with my close friend on last Christmas then and I lately went came home late. When I entered my home, my grandmother was waiting me then and she shouted at me and taught me a lesson. I knew she wasn’t angry with me but she was worried about me. After she finished teaching me, she cooked supper for me. 

One day, we went to eat at an expensive restaurant with our family. When I was eating, she granted gave me the best food. To sum up, my grandmother knows ways how to take care of anyone.


Finally, she is very kind. In her life, she never talked behind anyone’s back. Everyone believed her. She liked to share give food and clothes for the poor. She gave the poor money because the poor were in need of many things so she donated money to charitable funds. She always treats everone very well and is friendly.
All about things Everything about my grandmother makes me admire and love her so much. I want to become a person like my grandmother.

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My Grandma

If I could be anyone for a day I wish I could become my grandmother, because I really admire for her wit, hard work, care and kindness.
Firstly, I want to talk about her wit. She is seventy-two years old. She is old but she uses a computer and a smart phone for entertainment very well. She is the best computer user in our family. She is very thoughtful. I remember when I was young, she took me to go to supermarket. She chose all of the best food and fruit there. When we went home, I opened them to eat. It was delicious and wonderful. All of the food and fruit she bought, surpassed my expectations. From then on, I have admired her a lot.
Secondly, my grandmother is hard-working. Although she is retired, she still helped her family by helping her daughter. Such as getting up early to go to her daughter’s hospital and working there until three hours (Do you mean "until 3 AM"?). She managed all of the workers and finances in the hospital professionally. Then she went home and relaxed. She still continued working by doing housework. For example, she cooked dinner for her family and cleaned the house. I have so much to learn from her.
Next, she is not only hard-working but also cares for all the people in her family. When I was sick, she took me to go to the hospital. She took care of me with all her heart, so I loved her so much. When I did not have money, she gave me a lot of money to buy everything I needed. She gave not only to me, but also people. I remember that when I went out with my closefriend (best friend) on last Christmas then and I lately went home late. When I entered my home, my grandmother was waiting for me then she shouted at me and taught me a lesson. I knew she wasn’t angry me but she was worried about me. After she finished teaching me, she cooked repast at night for me (Do you mean "she cooked past midnight for me"?).
One day, we went eat at an expensive restaurant with our family. When I was eating, she granted bought me the best food. To sum it up, my grandmother knows ways how to take care of anyone.
Finally, she is very kind. In her life, she has never talked behind anyone’s back. Everyone believed  believes her. She liked to share donate food and clothes for to the poor. She gave the poor money because The poor were in need of many things, so she donated money to charitable funds. She always treats everone very well and is friendly.
All about things the things about make me admire and love my grandmother so much. I want to become a person like my grandmother.

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My grandma

If I could be anyone someone for a one day. I wish to become my grandmother, because I really admire for her wit, hard working, carefulness and kindness.
Fristly, I want to tell about her wit. She is seventy-two years old. She is old but she can uses a the computer and a the smart phone for entertainment very well. She is the best computer user in our family. She is very thoughful. I remember when I was young. She took me to go to supermarket. She chose all of the best food and fruit, here. When we went home, I opened them to eat  opened the package and ate them. ,It was they were delicious and wonderful. All of the food and the fruit who she bought, surpass always what that I am expected. From then on, I admire her a lot.
Secondly, my grandmother is hard-working. Although she was retired, she still helped family her daugher to manage the hospital. by helping her daughter, such as getting She always getting up early to go to her daughter’s hospital and worked there until about three hours. She managed all of workers and finance professionally in the hospital. Then she went home and relaxed. She still continued working for housework. For example, she cooked Such as cooking dinner for her family and cleaned cleaning the house. I have need to learn from her so much.
Next, she is not only hard-working but also cares for all people in her family. When I was sick, she took me to go to the hospital. She took care of me by heart so I loved her so much. When I did not have money, she gave me a lot of money to buy everything I needed. She gave not only me but also people. I remember that once I went out with my closefriend on the last Christmas then and I lately went home late. When I entered my home, my grandmother was waiting for me then she shouted at me and taught me a lesson. I knew she wasn’t angry about me but she was worried about me. After she finished teaching me, she cooked repast at night for me.
One day, we went to eat at an expensive restaurant with our family. When I was eating, she granted me the best food. To sum up, my grandmother knows the ways how to take care of anyone.
Finally, she is very kind. In her life, she never talked the bad things of someone behind anyone’s back.  Everyone believed her. She liked to share food and clothes for with the poor. She gave the poor money because the poor were in needs of many things, so she donated money to charitable funds. She always treats treated everone very well and is friendly.
All about the things make make me admire and love my grandmother so much. I want to become a person like my grandmother.

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