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I like to watch game shows, and my favourite one is Loto Zabava.This show lets people to win much  a lot of (or "lots of") money as well as flats, cars, and home appliances.
Every Monday my family and I watch Loto Zabava at 8 pm.The hosts (masculine plural ) of this game show are Max and Dan.They are very funny and help players to win.Contestants are different people, and must be at least 18 years old.Contestants have to buy game tickets, if they are lucky they may win flats, cars and home appliances.
First, players take their positions on a movie set or about the television screens.Max and Dan are spin " drum luck" and speak (or "say" or "read") six numbers.If this these numbers coincide with those that on the ticket, you are win the super present!
One day my mum bought game tickets and won the iron.I advise you to play Loto Zabava.

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I like to watch game shows, but and my favourite game show is Loto Zabava. In this show helps people compete to earn much win money and wins apartments, flats, cars, home appliances.
Every Monday my family and I watch Loto Zabava at 8 pm. The hosts of this game show is are Max and Dan.They are very funny and help players to win. Contestants are different random people, if they are aged at least 18 years. Contestants have to buy game tickets, if they are lucky they may win flats, cars and or home appliances.
First players take their positions on the TV movie set or about around the television screens. Max and Dan are spin the "lotto drum luck" and speak read out six numbers. If these numbers coincide with those that on your ticket, you are win the super present!
One day my mum bought game tickets and won the an iron. I advise you to play Loto Zabava.