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This is my first entry, can you help check grammar mistakes? Thank a lot.
Entry for the weekend. Today is a bad day, the sun seems to hiding somewhere or maybe he doesn’t want to wake up after a long sleep. It is still raining during all day and very cold. I’m staying at home, counting the rainfall down drop by drop and continuing to write my diary like other normal days. Two years five months, how quickly time goes! I was silent like a shadow. I gave up my job and refused to return to work when they called me three times because my health is bad and I am experiencing go down with many pain spasms. However, innextjust 5 more months, the doctor will remove it (what will the doctor remove?) from my mouth and everything will be alright. I hope that will be totally wonderful. The sun will come with appear in the sky and my future on will be tomorrow. I love you, tomorrow.
This is my first entry, can you help check grammar mistakes? Thank a lot.
Entry for weekend. Today is a bad day. The sun seems to hide somewhere or maybe he doesn’t want to wake up after a long sleep. The weather is still rain during all day and very cold. I’m staying at home, counting rain fall, down drop by drop and continue writing a diary like other normal days. 2 years 5 months - how quickly time goes! I was silent like a shadow. I gave up my job and refused when they called me return to work three times because my health went down, with many spasms of pain. But just the next 5 months, doctor will remove it from my mouth, and everything will be alright. I hope that it is totaly wonderful. The sun will come out in the sky and on my future on tomorrow. I love you, tomorrow.
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