Today is not good
The weather is not good,i feel it's going to rain,but not rain.they say is Haze day.
Maybe the atomosphere was polluted.the factory waster gas,the trees are cut down.lead to the atomosphere become very badly.
i hope to solve the problem,more glow the trees,reduce the exhaust gas.make our world become more beautiful.
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Today is not good
The weather is not good,i feel that it's going to rain but its not rain.they say it is Haze day.
Maybe the atomosphere was polluted.the factory wasting gas,the trees are cut down and lead to in the atomosphere becomes very badly.
i hope to solve the problem, grow more glow the trees,reduce the exhaust from gas and make our world become more beautiful.
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Today is not good
The weather is not good. I feel like it's going to rain, but not rain. They say is Haze day.
Maybe the atomosphere was polluted. The factory waste gas, the trees are cut down. Lead to the atomosphere become very badly.
I hope to solve the problem, more glow the trees, reduce the exhaust gas. Make our world become more beautiful.
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