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Today was a very busy day where I work. I was very tired at the end of the day, but I'm happy for two reasons. (or, I am grateful for two things) First, my mom takes the first step to stop smoking. When I think about that, I'm filled with happiness. Second: after my trip to New Zealand, I registered in an English course in my town today. I feel my English will improve now. Today I'm requesting my first class in Italki, too. By the way, studying English makes me happy!
Excellent work! I'm glad you enjoy languages so much, and welcome to Italki!
Returning to the my studies
Today is was a very busy day in at my work. I was very tired by the end of the day, but I'm happy for two things/reasons, first: my mom does took the first step to stop smoking, when I think about that, I'm filled with happiness. Two/Secondly: After my traveling to New Zealand, today I subscribed in an English course of English in my town. I feel that my English will improve now. Today I requested my first class in Italki too. By the way, studying English makes me happy!!!
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Oi Leandro! Great job! You'll become fluent in English in no time, study hard. :)
**Uma pequena dica:
Se vc escreve o verbo ''to be'' depois dos pronomes, por exemplo, ''I am (I'm), you are, he is" entao o verbo vai ser na forma do gerundio: I'm studyING, you are correctING my entry, I'm readING this.
E' a mesma coisa se for uma pergunta: Are you studyING English, Am I readING this?
Quando o verbo esta no presente/pasado/etc nao precisa do verbo ''to be'': I study English, You correct my entry, I read this.
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Today was a very busy day at work. By the end of the day, I was very tired. But, I'm happy for two reasons. First, my mom took the first step to stop smoking. This makes me very happy. Second, after my trip to New Zealand, I've enrolled in an English course in my home town. I'm thinking that my English will improve now. Today, I requested my first class in Italki, too. By the way, studying English makes me happy!!!
Returning to my studies
Today is a very busy day at my work. I'm very tired by the end of the day, but I'm happy for two things. First, my mom took the first step to quit smoking. When I think of it I'm filled with happiness. Second, after my trip to New Zealand, today I enrolled in a course of English in my town. I feel my English will improve now. Today I've requested my first class in Italki too. By the way, studying English makes me happy!!!
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