HELP ME TO CORRECT THIS :) We can identify after reading Austen’s novel, she tries to change woman’s view by writing great novels. She is a knowledgeable woman who has ambition and goal in woman’s per

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HELP ME TO CORRECT THIS :) We can identify after reading Austen’s novel, she tries to change woman’s view by writing great novels. She is a knowledgeable woman who has ambition and goal in woman’s perspective. The character of Elizabeth Bennet has a relationship with the real life of the author of Pride and Prejudice namely Jane Austen. Her personality is intelligent; radical minded and assertive is a reflection of the author’s personality. Reading books frequently is one of the prominent similarities between the main character and author. The existence of these two characters brings a lot of praise from literary circles. Personality as if Elizabeth Bennet tells how Jane Austen trying to change the view of women stodgy British in the 19th century. We can see in her novels, Austen Tries to change woman’s view by writing great novels. She is a knowledgeable woman who has ambition and goals in woman’s perspective. Closely - related to the author's life, the main character of Pride and Prejudice has the same goal that she tries to change woman’s view that still has old-fashioned ideas. Bennet tried to give a useful role to the close friends and tried to change their perspective of life that is will be more meaningful if they have healthy personality.

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HELP ME TO CORRECT THIS :)

We can identify after reading Austen’s novel, (that) she her tries (aim is to) change womans (perspectives) by writing great novels (through her writing). Austin, (was) a knowledgeable woman who has (with great) ambition and goal(s) in woman’s perspective. The character of Elizabeth Bennet (shares a number of charateristics) with the real life of the author of Pride and Prejudice, namely, Jane Austen [Before how you had written it made it sound like Elizabeth Bennet had a relationship with Jane Austen - like she was married to Jane Austin wkwkwkwk]. (The character of elizabeth Bennet has) a good personality is intelligent; radical minded and assertive; is a (reflective) of the author’s personality. Reading books frequently is one of the (the most) prominent (of) similarities between the main character and author[if you are saying something is prominent - in that it occurs most frequently - then you must say it is "the most prominent" Seperti "yang paling"]. The existence of these two characters brings (brought) a lot of praise from literary circles. Personality as if Elizabeth Bennet's (personality) tells (explains) how Jane Austen try(ed) to change the view of women 19th century (Britain). We can see in her novels, that Austen tries to change woman’s view(s) by writing great novels. She is a knowledgeable woman who has ambition and goals in woman’s perspective. Closely related to the author's life, the main character of Pride and Prejudice has (posess) the same (goals in trying) to change woman’s view that still has old-fashioned ideas. Bennet tried to give a (her friends) useful role(s) (to her close friends) to the close friends and tried to (in an attempt to change) their life perspective(s) of life (so) that (they) will be more meaningful if they have (more) healthy personalit(ies) (in he future).

This is well written but just a little bit awkward. Try to make the flow of the sentence structure sound more natural, perhaps keep your language a little simpler. But I understood what you were saying. Very good.

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