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A little travel Yesterday I went to Beto Carrero World the biggest thematic park in Latin America. I woke up more or less 3am, after I got up I took a shower and went to find my friends. Everyone was so much exciting with this travel, after all we have never been there before. We went out our city at 4:50am and arrived there 9am. We took a photo in front of the main castle of there with everyone, but this photo was so expensive, 10 reais. After that everyone went to see your own things, someone went to play in radicals toys, seeing the animals, eating something and lots of things that the park offers for you. In the lunch time I and another friend of mine went to eat in the food court, but there were lots of people there that we can't walk, we found a restaurant, but we thought "It will be so much expensive again", we were not wrong, the dish was 32 reais for people, in my town I pay 8 reais, but I was starving, so I paid. In the afternoon we join with other girl that was alone we went in some toys and saw other animals, in general was an amazing travel I’m tired until now, but that’s OK…

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A little travel

Yesterday, I went to Beto Carrero World, the biggest thematic park in Latin America. I woke around(less awkward in conversation)3am. After I got up, I took a shower and went to find my friends. Everyone was so much (isn't need when you say "so") excited with this travel (you can say "journey" or "trip" instead), after all we have never been there before. We left our city at 4:50am and arrived there at 9am. We took a photo in front of the main castle of there with everyone, but this photo (use "it" instead) was so expensive. It was 10 reais. After that, everyone went to see your own things, and someone went to play in radicals toys, seeing the animals, eating something (things)and lots of things ("other stuff" is less awkward)that the park offers for you. In the lunch time, another friend of mine and I went to eat in the food court, but there were lots of people there that we couldn't walk. We found a restaurant, but we thought "It will be so much expensive again". We were not wrong; the dish was 32 reais for people, in my town (you could say "back at home" or mention the city name) I pay 8 reais, but I was starving, so I paid. In the afternoon we joined with another girl that was alone. We went in some toys and saw other animals, in general it was an amazing travel (you can say "journey" or "trip" instead) I have been tired until now, but that’s OK…

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