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Sir,
I was extremely pleased when our local council eventually placed special bins in the area to encourage recycling. There are, however, several problems.
For one thing, there are a lot of people who don´t know which container they should use. You could do some advertisement about recycling and this way, they could learn more.
There is other problem, the containers aren´t in a good place. They should be in a special place and this way the neighbors will be very happy becuase the smell won´t come into the house.
The size the containers aren´t good because the village is very big so they should be bigger.
I do think that these suggestions might help solve the situation. The rest depends both on the council and on our neighbours’ willingness to act in a more civilised manner.
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Please check my story
Sir,
I was extremely pleased when our local council eventually placed special bins in the area to encourage recycling. There are, however, several problems.
For one thing, there are a lot of people who don´t know which container they should use. You could do some advertisements about recycling and this way, they could learn more.
There is another problem, the containers aren´t in a good place. They should be in a special place and this way the neighbors will be very happy becuaause the smell won´t come into the house.
The size of the containers areisn´t (singular because we refer to the size, not the containers) good because the village is very big so they should be bigger.
I do think that these suggestions might help solve the situation. The rest depends both on the council and on our neighbours’ willingness to act in a more civilised manner.
Muy bien,
Very little wrong with this although I might have phrased things slightly differently for example
You could do some advertisements about recycling and this way, they could learn more.
You could run an advertising campaign to help people recycle
The size of containers aren´t good because the village is very big so they should be bigger.
The containers aren´t big enough for the village
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Hola, asi eres la segunda persona hoy :)) You have sent your English notes to Japanese section :))
l think you wanted to send it to English natives :))
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