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My future plan
I'm going to tell you about a plan that I have, which is to apply for a MBA course in Germany.
(a better sentence could be - "I'm going to tell you about my plan of applying for a MBA course in Germany")
At the moment, I am trying to improve my English to get a high score on the IELTS.
I thought of this plan when I was a student. My dream is to study in a European country becuase I want to meet people from different countries. There are many famous universities in Europe, so I think that if I can study there I can could learn many things at a in high level of education. Moreover, I can could experience a western culture which I now that I just see on TV; which is absolutely different from my culture.
(a better sentence could be - "Moreover, I would be able to experience western culture which is absolutely different from my culture and which I now just see on TV.)
I choose Germany for some a few reasons. Firstly, my cousin lives there. He has been in Germany for over 20 years, so he can speaks German like a native. He can could also help me if I get in trouble when studying there. Sencondly, the tuition fee in Germany is not very high, so my parents would will not have to pay much money for my study.
I will achieve the this plan if I get a high score on the IELTS. To do thatit, I have to practice English day by day and keep motivation motivated.
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