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discussion about the advertisement of products Nowadays, there is a heated discussion about whether the good quality products should be advertised. Some people believe that if the products are good enough , then there is no need to advertise them .Yet, no one can deny the fact that the merits of advertisement are not limited to this . I have the idea that it is vital to have advertisements in our life with various aspects. Admittedly, it is understandable to say that people always buy some products without any advertisement but with a good quality. In other word , it seems advertisement are not that significant for us . However, as a method of media , what can advertisements bring us is rather a powerful effects than the simple information it can bring to us . So it shows many public welfare information through the way of advertising. In addition, it can improve the development of our country's economy. It is advertisement that give a chance to actors to show themselves on the spotlight, which makes them earn more money. In conclusion, advertisements make a great contribution to our country.Not only can it improve the quality of our country ,but it can also give us more available information.

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discussion about the advertisement of products

Nowadays, there is a heated discussion about whether the good quality products should be advertised. Some people believe that if the products are good enough , then there is no need to advertise them. Yet, no one can deny the fact that the merits of advertisement are not limited to this. I have the idea that In my opinion it is vital to have advertisements in our life with various aspects for several reasons.
Admittedly, it is understandable to say that people sometimes always buy some products without any advertisementing but with a good quality, because they know the quality is good. In other words , it seems advertisements are not that significant to us . However, as a method of media, what can advertisements can bring us is a rather a powerful effects more than just the simple information it can bring to us. So we can shows many benefit the public welfare information through the way of advertising.
In addition, it can improve the development of our country's economy. It is advertisement that gives a chance to actors a chance to show themselves in on the spotlight, which makes allows them to earn more money.
In conclusion, advertisements make a great contribution to our country.  Not only can it they improve the quality of our country, but they it can also give us more available information.

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yes... its hard. lol
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