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Freedom
After weeks of hard work, finally my exams have finished. Now I'm free! Vacation!
This semester was weird but as fun as the last one and I have met new friendships, I've me because I've met new nice people who are nice. [or one may say something like: my classmates were all nice and I've made a lot of new friends]
Also [A introductory word such as "also" is not needed here because you have started a new line of thought from the nice friends you met, to studying English for fun.] I feel happy because last year I started to try began an attempt to improve my English; just for fun, and today I can am able to speak and listen comprehend the English language the most of time most of the time. When I started I only was able to chat a little bit. It was, in some way, hard to find nice people to practice with, but the few people who I could did find to practice speaking with talk were nice. I have met some nice people in on this web website. One of them is a special friend to me.
Now I'll I have more time freedom to keep practicing and improving my languages, more time freedom to have fun, more time for and freedom for many things until next year. [Here we have used your title word, "Freedom" in place of "more time".This serves to sum-up your use of Freedom as your title. If not, the title could be: "More Time", or something else that you like.]
Consider learning synonyms for "nice", such as: pleasing; agreeable; delightful; amiably; pleasant; kind. It is not mandatory to always include adjectives when talking aout people. One may say; "It's hard to find people to practice with, but the people who I did find made good language partners" -or something similiar.
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