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Unforgettable Thanks giving This is my second thanks giving in the United State, but it's my first time to go to American's house to celebrate Thanks giving. It's a unforgettable experience for me. We drove from Texas to Colorado, it took us about 15 hours drove. For me, as a Taiwanese, I seldom drove like this. When we arrived my friend's house, we went to ski. This time because my friend's husband is a coach of snowboarding, so I and my friends all tried to learn snowboarding, that's my first time to snowboarding. At first, I'm hardly keep balance, after got some instruction, we learned better, I just keep practice, then I found I start to love snowboarding, I really had a lot of fun on it! All of my friends learned well, we all went to the top of the mountain, and everyone can went down successfully. I wish I can get more chance to snowboarding. We had a lot of food on Thanks giving, include the big turkey, honey ham, and roast duck, and the day after thanks giving, all of my friends decided to cook back to my american friends, so we cooked a lot of traditional Chinese food, I can feel that they like the fried rice best, and the egg drop soup. Anyway, we had good time there, Colorado is really a beautiful place!

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Unforgettable Thanksgiving

This is my second Thanksgiving in the United State, but it's my first time to go to an American's house to celebrate Thanksgiving. It was an unforgettable experience for me. We drove from Texas to Colorado and it took us about 15 hours drove. For me, as a Taiwanese, I seldom drive like this. When we arrived my friend's house, we went to ski. This time because my friend's husband is a snowboarding coach , so I and my friends and I all tried to learn snowboarding. That was my first time to snowboarding. At first, I'm hardly keep kept balance.  After got some instruction, we I (you should not change from I to we in the same sentence) learned better, I just keep practising and then I found that I started to love snowboarding. I really had a lot of fun on doing it! All of my friends learned well, we all went to the top of the mountain, and everyone can went down successfully. I wish I can could get more chance to snowboarding.
We had a lot of food on Thanksgiving, include the big turkey, honey ham, and roast duck. , and In return the day after Thanksgiving all of my friends decided to cook back to for my American friends, so we cooked a lot of traditional Chinese food. I can feel felt that they liked the fried rice best and the egg drop soup. Anyway, we had good time there, Colorado is really a beautiful place!

 

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Unforgettable Thanksgiving

This is my second thanksgiving in the United States, but it's my first time to go to an American's house to celebrate Thanksgiving. It's an unforgettable experience for me. We drove from Texas to Colorado, it took us about 15 hours to drive there. For me, as a Taiwanese, I seldom drive like that this. When we arrived at my friend's house, we went to ski. This time because my friend's husband is a snowboarding coach of , so my friends and I all tried to learn snowboarding, that's my first time to try snowboarding. At first, I could hardly keep balance, after we got some instruction, we learned better more,  so I just kept practicing, then I found I started to love snowboarding, I really had a lot of fun on doing it! All of my friends had learned well alot, so we all went to the top of the mountain, and everyone can went down successfully. I wish I can could get more chances to snowboarding.
We had a lot of food on Thanksgiving, included was a big turkey, honey ham and roast duck, and so the day after Thanksgiving, all of my friends decided to cook back to for my american friends, so we cooked a lot of traditional Chinese food, I can feel that they like the fried rice the best and the egg drop soup. Anyway, we had a good time there, Colorado is really a beautiful place!

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