about our life
our life is very short,you know.You know, that majority of people all over the world die every minute.They die ,because they do not follow right way of their life. they have a wrong lifestyle also.Some people anticipate that their life becomes shorter and shorter.And they try to become more responsible for their life. They try to do good acts and help everyone who needs in their help.They becomes more interesting for peoples lives. but, in my opinion :LET'S VALUE EVERY SECOND OF OUR WONDERFUL LIFE! it will be better than try to enjoy the last moments of our life before death!
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About our life.
Our life is very short, you know. You know that majority of people all over the world die every minute.They die because they do not follow the right way of life. They have the wrong lifestyle also. Some people anticipate that their life will become shorter and shorter and they try to become more responsible for their life. They try to do good acts and help everyone who needs in their help. They become more interested in peoples' lives; but in my opinion we should VALUE EVERY SECOND OF OUR WONDERFUL LIFE! it will be better than trying to enjoy the last moments of our life before death!
Julia, here is a correction.
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Robert
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about our life
our life is very short,you know.You know, that majority of people all over the world die every minute.They die ,because they do not follow the right way of to live their life. they have a wrong lifestyle also.Some people anticipate that their life becomes shorter and shorter.And they try to become more responsible for their life. They try to do good acts and help everyone who needs in their help.They becomes more interesting for other peoples lives. but, in my opinion :LET'S VALUE EVERY SECOND OF OUR WONDERFUL LIFE! it will be better thaen try to enjoy the last moments of our life before death!
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About our life
Our life is very short, you know. You know, that majority A lot of people, all over the world, die every minute.They die, because they do not follow right way of lead their life properly. They have an wrong improper lifestyle, also. Some people anticipate that their lives become shorter and shorter, and they try to become more responsible for their lives. They try to do good acts and help everyone, who need in their help. They become more interesting for peoples' lives. But, in my opinion, LET'S VALUE EVERY SECOND OF OUR WONDERFUL LIFE! It will be better thantrying to enjoy the last moments of our lives before death!
Well written , just a few minor errors! I agree with you, we ought to live up every single moments of our lives but life has its ups and downs and good days can be more precious than the bad ones. =)
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try to become more responsible for your life)
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I think that's a good point of view on life.
Sometimes I waste lots of time though...
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