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No Place Like Home Living "abroad" for 2 years now, this expression from Wizard of Oz makes perfect sense. While I was in France, the family home was never too far away and it was possible to say I often, every 2 month at least. Of course, I could see my friends everyday if I'd liked. But since I left to work in New Caledonia, which is 24 hours flight away from France, these contacts are limited to Skype sessions. Due to the ten hours time difference, it's quite hard to talk more than 1 hour each call. If there is a call at all as most of the time I'm awake, they are still sleeping in France. I can tell you, home feels very far away. Last August, my company offered me a flight back to France for 1 month holidays. When I went back home, nothing had changed. Of course at first, everybody was really happy and would like to know a lot about my experience. But after a few days, the little things I left 2 years were just at the same place. My mother had her bad jokes that makes me laugh, my father was still preocupied when I took the car, my best friend found (again) a new hobby... After a month I took my flight with my mind in peace. Home will always be home!

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No Place Like Home

Living "abroad" for two [1] years now, this expression from the Wizard of Oz makes perfect sense. While I was in France, the family home was never too far away, and it was possible to say I often [2], every two months at least. Of course, I could see my friends every day [3] if I'd liked/wanted to.
But since I left to work in New Caledonia, which is a 24-hour flight away from France, these contacts are limited to Skype sessions. Due to the 10-hour time difference, it's quite hard to talk more than 1 hour each call. That is, if there is a call at all -- as most of the time when I'm awake, they are still sleeping in France. I can tell you, home feels very far away.
Last August, my company offered me a flight back to France for a one-month month holiday. When I went back home, nothing had changed. Of course at first, everybody was really happy and wanted to know a lot about my experience. But after a few days, the little things I had left two years before were just as I left them:  My mother told her bad jokes that make me laugh, my father still worried [4] when I took the car, and my best friend (again) found (again) a new hobby...

After a month I took my return flight with my mind at peace. Home will always be home!

 

[1]  There is a convention to write out the numbers one to nine in words when they are used in a non-mathematical context.  But don't worry about it; the convention is usually ignored!

[2]  "to say I often" is not understandable.  

[3]  every day (adverb)  "He goes there every day."      everyday (adjective)  "I'm more comfortable when I wear my everyday clothes."

[4]  "preoccupied" is a possible word choice, but the word worried better expresses his anxious concern about your well-being.

 

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