To get to the second rocky peak 2 we have had to climb the stairs, there is was only one timber path (OR - the path was only single file). Because of many visitors who will going down, then we must be willing has to queue up first. at the time While we were sitting, suddenly two friends who went to Mata Air Comberan is here arrived earlier also through other routes. Indeed, there is more than one road to the summit is not just one, and not only more than one peak summit, there are two peaks. We chose peaks 2 due to to because the top one we still have a would require passing a long pass route. So we decided to to peak 2. Once after the queue is was finished, we climbed the stairs logs log stairs one by one. After reaching the peak, we lost all sense of fatigue. How beautiful we can see the scenery we can see from the top 2. From the second peak of the two peaks, we can also see the top 1. at the top, the wind is blowing pretty hard, so it is not recommended to smoke cigarettes at the top because you will quickly run out :D from the top we can also see Embung, water storage reservoirs. in front of From this peak is still there are no cliffs higher. How beautiful the scenery on top of Nglanggeran.

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Past/Passed are easily confused, for more info look here: http://www.towson.edu/ows/past.htm

Tense: Most of the errors in your writing seem to be tense issues, I know this is tricky as Bahasa Indonesia does not use tense the same was as Bahasa Inggriss.

Adjectives: A couple of times you place an adjective after a noun in your writing, as far as i know this is correct for Indonesian, however in English we place adjectives before a noun we are describing. Example: He has a strong accent / Dia punya aksen kental.

Jalan-jalan Anda melihat sangat cantik. Saya suka "Bushwalking" dan "trecking" di sini dalam Australia. Saya bisa mengerti Bahasa Inggriss Anda dengan baik, itu hanya perlu sedikit-sedikit latihan. :)  

Before reaching the top we want to turn first to Mata Air Comberan (Comberan spring). We climbed the wooden stairs to the large rock that is was in front of us, after reaching the top, the road is extreme was difficult for me. I do did not dare go there because it passes through two narrow cliffs. Unlike the previous cliff where we walked on land that is in between the two cliffs; this time we were are not walking on the soil, because it there is a steep cliff down arms and legs (I'm not sure what this means) so we have to stick on a to the cliff because under us is like a small and narrow gap. although this it is not too narrow and steep, but for me this has it was too been extreme. Only two friends who passed, I and other friends my other friends and I (formal) - OR - me and my other friends (informal) back to followed the route back to the peak, the road to the top was more slippery than before. With the peak already in sight, we met a friend of our party who had reached the summit long before me us. We just want to reached the peak when he was actually already going down. Then I told him about our friends who were in the Mata Air Comberan and they he was going there too.

Last week me and my friends did a trip to Gunung Kidul, Yogyakarta. We Climbed an ancient volcano named Nglanggeran located in Patuk area. We set off from the hostel at 8:30 am. The trip to the summit Nglanggeran was very enjoyable. We walked Past the stairs of stone and ground earth - OR - We passed the stairs of stone and earth. Indeed, there are were many large boulders that were very beautiful. In fact, sometimes we have had to pass through a very narrow route, passing between two narrow rock cliffs narrow. In Nglanggeran there is also a camping ground. But as it happened, when we were there no one was doing camping.