Little task, please check it

The story below is kind of a home task. The point was to check the grammar and correct it. Because i'm not native speaker I guess the text is still full of mistakes. But I can screw it up. Please, don't change sentences, words and constructions, just grammar. Thank you very much in advance!


I’ve spent most a enjoyable few days in Stratford-upon- Avon with my three my friends. We decided to go there several weeks ago and I booked hotel rooms for us in the town.
The hotel was really impressive from the outside, but the bedrooms were rather small. We arrived quite late on the first evening because we'd been working the whole day and all we wanted to do then was to have a good meal and go to our beds.

The next morning we got up quite late and ate a big meal at the hotel. We spent the rest of the day driving around the countryside and stopping now and then to have a short walk.

On the second day there we managed to get tickets to the theatre
and in the evening we went to watch one of Shakespeare’s plays. Earlier in the day two of my friends told me that they would rather spend the evening at a pub, but in fact we all thoroughly enjoyed the play and went to the pub afterwards.
I saw a woman there whom I thought I had recognised – I suddenly had realised that she was one of the actresses from the play.

Little task, please check it

The story below is kind of a home task. The point was to check the grammar and correct it. Because i'm not native speaker I guess the text still full of mistakes. But I can screw it up. Please, don't change sentences, words and constructions, just grammar. Thank you very much in advance! 

I (I’ve) spent a most enjoyable few days in Stratford-upon- Avon with  (three) my three friends.

(or you could say with 'three of my friends')

 We decided to go there several weeks ago and I booked hotel rooms for us in the town.
The hotel was really impressive from the outside, but the bedrooms were rather small. We arrived quite late on the first evening because we had been (we've) been working the whole day and all we wanted to do then was to have a good meal and go to our beds. (you could use the short form we'd been)

The next morning, we got up quite late and ate a big meal at the hotel. We spent the rest of the day driving around (round) the countryside and stopping now and then to have a short walk.

On the second day there, we managed to get tickets to the theatre
and in the evening we went to watch one of Shakespeare’s plays. Earlier in the day, two of my friends told me that they would rather spend the evening at a pub, but, in fact, we all thoroughly enjoyed the play and went to the pub afterwards.
I saw a woman there who (whom) I thought I (had) recognised – I suddenly (had) realised that she was one of the actresses from the play.         (instead of the 'I' before suddenly which is repetitious as you have 'I' earlier in the sentence you could substitute with 'and'. If amending the text you could say 'I saw a woman who looked (vaguely) familiar and suddenly........')

Little task, please check it

The story below is kind of a home task. The point was to check the grammar and correct it. Because i'm not native speaker I guess the text still full of mistakes. But I can screw it up. Please, don't change sentences, words and constructions, just grammar. Thank you very much in advance!


I’ve spent a most enjoyable few days in Stratford-upon- Avon with three of my friends. We decided to go there several weeks ago and I booked hotel rooms for us in the town.
The hotel was really impressive from the outside, but bedrooms were rather small. We arrived quite late on the first evening because we'd been working whole day and all we wanted to do then was to have a good meal and go to our beds.

The next morning we got up quite late and ate a big meal at the hotel. We spent the rest of the day driving round the countryside and stopping now and then to have a short walk.

On the second day there we managed to get tickets to the theatre
and in the evening we went to watch one of Shakespeare’s plays. Earlier in the day two of my friends told me that they would rather spend the evening at a pub, but in fact we all thoroughly enjoyed the play and went to the pub afterwards.
I saw a woman there whom I thought I had recognised – I suddenly had realised that she was one of the actresses from the play.